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The colours drain away,
Leaving only the monotonous grey.

The grass stops swaying,
But they do not start decaying.

The colour has been sapped,
From this world which is now trapped.

It is stuck behind impossible bars,
With the sky showing no stars.

The rainbows are just dull silhouette,
Appearing when the sun's grey rays are wet.

The world turns quickly.
Making its inhabitants feel sickly.

A small speck of light glints from the rainbow.
A tiny spatter of colour which starts to glow.

The colour starts to spread.
Streaks of blue and red.

Staining the world with beautiful colours.
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:iconcuincyboy:
Nice one but confused my mind so much
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~PhoenFox Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. Hahahaha, yes it confused me when I wrote it. =)
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~BleachedShark Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well written =) I can see it playing like a little video in my mind's eye.
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~PhoenFox Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! =)
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Mood: Love ~KaylatardandPoncho Mar 19, 2012  Student General Artist
The rhythm is really dang good, and it doesn't flow in a conventional sense, but yeah, I love it. :3
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~PhoenFox Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
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~KaylatardandPoncho Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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~PhoenFox Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=)
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~Millisecond Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You've painted a nice image here, and I think the rhyming scheme suits the poem. Just a little typo: "Appearing when the suns [sun's] grey rays are wet."
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~PhoenFox Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
Thanks I'll correct that, stupid autocorrect. Hahaha.
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